the second critique after i refined the idea. what i was trying to show the flexibility and the mind bending and how we started with an object of one action and did a hundred more. and that’s how i came up with the idea of bending the straws and created the shape of flower cause it’s more related to my 100 things because when you see that they are more playful than serious and that’s why i got rid of the red lips that i used on my first idea. i tried to do more contrast and that’s when i chose to shades of green but then i noticed it go to crowded. one of the points that got repeated on the pre-final critique that i need to add more stuff than just using the straw it self.
Fatima A. 