after the notes that we have been given when we did the group critique. I fixed my sentences length cause this was my major problem that my sentences are too long.
and if you could notice between the previous paragraphs and the final i arranged the bullet points and did a double space between the headline and the points to emphasize that the first sentence is the opening to the listed points below.
it was interesting to see the major difference to work with a sentence and a paragraph. although it’s a body text it still wasn’t that easy to work with cause when you think of a body text you think that it’s easy just make a text smaller and that’s it. but you need to think of letting and kerning and the sentence length and the font size and the typeface and they all need to work together.
Fatima A. 